[Poetry] Naïveté

Alright just tryin'a get the ball rolling a bit perhaps ~!~!~!

So I'll share my newest poem,

Those with lots to learn have lots to teach & those with lots to teach have lots to learn. wrote:

When I first met my first lover,
my experienced lover
regressed and rejoining naïveté
he kissed me with his eyes closed.

Every kiss I watched and waited
Until one day it pierced him and he looked
When our eternities bridged our mirrored voids,
I taught him to kiss with his eyes open.

Comments welcome if you have any, not really seeking criticism because I don't plan to change anything, just to evolve with time and effort.

Go post stuff of your own now. c:

loved this when I first read it and still love it now. uwu